Do you ever get something lost and are filled with frustration scouring the house? Do you ever suddenly discover that while you
searched the clock ticked away and precious time vanished? This is an every day problem but can really transform your day from good to bad. Losing something happens to everyone, but is is a serious problem that has to be fixed. (Check this sentence for punctuation and spelling.)
Of course, there is a way to avoid this problem completely. It is staying organized. Unfortunately, this is not exactly most people's
strongest strength. Besides, even if you have a taut and neat locker and a tidy room, realizing that a book or notebook is gone isn't rare. But once it happens, what is the result? Frustration and stress! People are usually irked by the fact the something you had two minutes ago is gone. They will usually start to frantically search, chiefly if it is important and valuable. This usual outcome will just create chaos. (Do not use contractions.)
But there are several solutions that once put into action will get that item back into your hands in a flash. One of the best is retracing
your steps. Lock your brain on the object. Let your mind flow back to where it could have been left behind, remembering where you have recently been. It could have easily been dropped while doing something else. Go back to those places and let your eyes scan the room, searching for that vanished thing. Just remember to keep calm and not start to desperately panic. That just creates a rough and bumpy day. This is usually enough to get it back.
Although it is possible for to get people nowhere in the search.( ??? ) It doesn't always work. Luckily, another way endures. It is cleaning your surroundings. Most people might not see how this might be of any benefit, but it is just as useful as the first. By tidying up, people will be able to much more clearly catch sight of the missing object. It could be under a bunch of crunched up papers or lime green notebook. Almost effortlessly you will grab that item back with this tip.
Misplacing something is a harsh dilemma, but has a few good solutions. This problem is happening constantly and has become a grave obstacle in people's daily lives.(Oops, don't change to first person.) This will not only acquire (word choice?) the missing item back but will save treasured time. These tips are bound to work. In other words, they are all anyone needs! They are like magic, suddenly making things appear from thin air!
Very good advice, Natalia!
Ideas 5: Organization 4 Identify the problem at the beginning of the conclusion. Word choice 5; Voice 5; Fluency 5; Conventions 4
Total = 28 =A
Outline
1 - the problem is losing something
2 - people are irked and start searching frantically
3 - solution #1 retracing your steps
solution #2 cleaning your surroundings
4 - retrace to find where you have recently been
clean up so finding it is easier
5 - causes not organized
effects frustration and stress
6- very serious problem that must be fixed
Final Draft - Where is it?!?
Do you ever get something lost and are filled with frustration scouring the house? Do you ever suddenly discover that while you
searched the clock ticked away and precious time vanished? This is an every day problem but can really transform your day from good to bad. Losing something happens to everyone, but is is a serious problem that has to be fixed. (Check this sentence for punctuation and spelling.)Of course, there is a way to avoid this problem completely. It is staying organized. Unfortunately, this is not exactly most people's
strongest strength. Besides, even if you have a taut and neat locker and a tidy room, realizing that a book or notebook is gone isn't rare. But once it happens, what is the result? Frustration and stress! People are usually irked by the fact the something you had two minutes ago is gone. They will usually start to frantically search, chiefly if it is important and valuable. This usual outcome will just create chaos.
(Do not use contractions.)
But there are several solutions that once put into action will get that item back into your hands in a flash. One of the best is retracing
your steps. Lock your brain on the object. Let your mind flow back to where it could have been left behind, remembering where you have recently been. It could have easily been dropped while doing something else. Go back to those places and let your eyes scan the room, searching for that vanished thing. Just remember to keep calm and not start to desperately panic. That just creates a rough and bumpy day. This is usually enough to get it back.
Although it is possible for to get people nowhere in the search.( ??? ) It doesn't always work. Luckily, another way endures. It is cleaning your surroundings. Most people might not see how this might be of any benefit, but it is just as useful as the first. By tidying up, people will be able to much more clearly catch sight of the missing object. It could be under a bunch of crunched up papers or lime green notebook. Almost effortlessly you will grab that item back with this tip.
Misplacing something is a harsh dilemma, but has a few good solutions. This problem is happening constantly and has become a grave obstacle in people's daily lives.(Oops, don't change to first person.) This will not only acquire (word choice?) the missing item back but will save treasured time. These tips are bound to work. In other words, they are all anyone needs! They are like magic, suddenly making things appear from thin air!
Very good advice, Natalia!
Ideas 5: Organization 4 Identify the problem at the beginning of the conclusion. Word choice 5; Voice 5; Fluency 5; Conventions 4
Total = 28 =A
Outline
1 - the problem is losing something2 - people are irked and start searching frantically
3 - solution #1 retracing your steps
solution #2 cleaning your surroundings
4 - retrace to find where you have recently been
clean up so finding it is easier
5 - causes not organized
effects frustration and stress
6- very serious problem that must be fixed